中卷节奏优化

精简ch15-20训练营闪回和医院场景的冗余描述:

ch16: 压缩搏击课初见场景(去扩写4行)
ch17: 精简告状/汇款等次要对话(去8行)
ch18: 压缩曲宁背景/金三角行动(去6行)
ch19: 精简争吵和胡局测试场景(去3行)
ch20: 压缩曲宁对Lisa的恨意独白(去3行)

总计精简约20行(12.5%),关键情节完整保留
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